WALT: Use adjectives (describing words) to make our writing interesting to the reader.
We pretended we were a soldier in the war, using our senses to describe what it was like.
I saw...Big machine guns shooting at soldiers and I saw blood flying
I heard...loud gas sound every where
I felt...blood dripping down me
I wondered...if New Zealand would win the war.
To Maxxis,
ReplyDeleteYou have used some good adjectives at the start of your writing just remember to keep it going. What did the blood look like? What did the loud gas sound like?
From Mrs Head