Thursday, April 30, 2015

Soldier-Moment in Time

WALT: Use adjectives (describing words) to make our writing interesting to the reader.
We pretended we were a soldier in the war, using our senses to describe what it was like.

I saw...Big machine guns shooting at soldiers and I saw blood flying
I heard...loud gas sound every where
I felt...blood dripping down me
I wondered...if New Zealand would win the war.